A woman sits
With a needle threaded
Halfway through
An unstitched thought,
Her child sits
With an open book
Halfway through
An unformed thought,
Her man sits
With a tangled mind
Halfway through
An unraveled thought,
Their world sits
With an uneasy feeling
Halfway through
A breaking thought…
Not a single thought
Makes it through!
Β©Aaysid
βOne person’s craziness is another person’s reality.β
Tim Burton
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Very positive idea..thanks
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Thank you. πβ€
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I can relate.
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Ha! I love this one, Aaysid. Sometimes they make it through, sometimes not. Lovely, my friend. π¦βΊοΈ
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Yes, it can happen like that sometimes. Thank you so much.π
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Indeed. Youβre most welcome, Aaysid. Always. βΊοΈ
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Amazing , Aaysid. Love this piece! So well formed. Wonderful message.π
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Wow, thank you so much for your kind feedback, Grace!β€
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Truly my pleasure.π
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I can picture all three of them, pondering, thinking. Effective use of parallel structure. Very nice!
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Thank you so much for the lovely feedback, Michele!π
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You are welcome. π
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Wow! That is reflective and beautiful. Really insightful!!
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Thank you so much. That is so kind of you to say. π
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Such a great poem Aaysid. ππ
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Thank you so much, Cindy! ππ
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sooo welcome!π
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Wowwww..! This is a marvellous poem dear Aaysid..!β¨ππ And you have nominated for sunshine blogger award dear..!πβ¨
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That is so sweet of you! I shall check out the nomination, thank you.πβ€
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You’re most welcome dear..!β€οΈ
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Woww..! This is such a marvellous poem dear Aaysid..! And you have nominated for sunshine blogger award dear..!ππβ¨ Congratulations..!β€οΈ
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Ha ha, that was cute and funny π
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Amazing piece,ππ
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Thank you so much.π
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This is so good. You’ve explained my thought process so well. Half-way through and then on to the next… π
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Thank you so much, Terveen. I am glad that you liked it.π
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