If I could sleepwalk
Out of this nightmare,
I should vow never
To sleep ever again,
But right now
I am unable to move,
And no one hears me
When I scream,
And no one knows
How bad a dream
I seem to be
Wide awake in!
Is it because it is
Always half past one
In somebody’s mind,
And it is not
An unusual time
To go amiss
Inside your own head;
To be half-dead?
©Aaysid
“I love to feel the temperature drop and the wind increase just before a thunderstorm. Then I climb in bed with the thunder.”
Amanda Mosher
Wow. That was wonderful , Aaysid. So well described . Sleep paralysis is so unnerving . Excellent !💕
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Thank you so much for the lovely feedback, Grace!❤😊
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My pleasure 💕
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The first two lines stick with me the most, but probably not as intended. I love this piece.
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Wow, thank you so much, Michael! 😊
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Amazing 💖💕
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Thank you so much, A! ❤😘
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Beautifully crafted and expressed, as always, Aaysid. Love it. ☺️💙
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Thank you so much, Jeff!😊
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You’re most welcome, Aaysid. Always! ☺️
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Wow! So beautiful lines! Well written! Thank you for sharing 🌹🙂☺👍
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Thank you so much! 😊😊
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Full of atmosphere and tinged with lots of fear (I should have been a poet!). G:)
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Just a thought: ‘If I could / I should’ against ‘If I could / I shall’ – I do have problems on occasion with my tenses. Always worth a second look when they are in use, Aaysid. G:)
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Wow, you are right! Thank you so much for the helpful advice. I am going to correct it. 😊😊
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You are welcome – I am very wary of commenting in critique upon anyone’s work as they can (and sometimes do) take a fence. But, I knew that you would be okay with my doing so. Take care. G:)
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So chilling and haunting. Quite know the feeling. 🙂
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Thank you so much.😊
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Very BEAUTIFULLY explained dear Aaysid..! This is fabulous..!💕💕
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That is so kind of you. Thanks a lot!😊💕
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It’s my pleasure dear..!✨✨🌈🦋
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Thank you.
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So sorrowful and intense and beautifully worded. Amazing work, Aaysid. 🙂
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Thank you, Mike. It means a lot.😊
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