I have been looking
for you in odd places
where contrasts invoke
more dread than joy,
not many smile if they
find crimson glisten
against the expanse
of white – blood drops
against the snow;
a shudder runs
down the spine.
I have been told
that you can be found
in far less
sinister circumstances,
like in the scatter
of everything benign,
but I have not
been very lucky
to make you mine.
I am scared
that you might be
too rare a commodity,
and that you could
only be acquired
for an impossible price;
I have been looking
for a change,
the spice of life,
but I think
it might entail
a complete redesign.
Β©Aaysid
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“A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness.”
Robert Frost
I loved the way the words flow , rest and carry-on β£οΈπ
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Thank you for the lovely comment. πβ€
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I agree with Reena–the flow of this poem is so smooth. And there’s that striking imagery again: “blood drops against the snow…” Just such a startling, urgent mental image. π
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Thank you so much for the kind comment.π
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I feel a sense of change coming embedded in these words, beautiful, C
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Thank you so much, Cheryl. π
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Excellent poem, Aaysid!
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Thank you so much, Michele. π
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My pleasure, Aaysid. π
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A wonderful poem, Aaysid. So well expressed and descriptive. Love it. βΊοΈ
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Thank you so much, Jeff. π
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Youβre welcome, Aaysid. Always. βΊοΈ
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Beautifully written!!!β€
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Thank you so much. π
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beautiful flow and such wonderful expresion Aaysid! πππ
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Thank you for the generous comment, Cindy. β€π
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Pleasure my friend! π
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A beautiful and honest one. Loved it. π
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Thank you so much. π
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