You are at a point in time
Where a small change
In the way the day unfolds
Is enough to unravel you;
When the mere sight
Of glistening post-rain roads
Cracks you open,
And you come apart
As soon as you catch
A whiff of damp seclusion,
Way before your brain
Can process the earthy
Fragrance of it to solidify
The old memory traces,
And when the fragmented
Clouds above your head
Refuse to let the sun
Burn its brilliance upon
Your clouded retinas,
Your repose falls to pieces—
You are your own weather.
©Aaysid
It rained here today, and I had listened to a breathtaking short story by James Joyce (hence, the quote) during my lunch break. The latter event was the highlight of the day.
“He lived a little distance from his body, regarding his own acts with doubtful sideglances.”
A Painful Case, James Joyce
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OMG, I love this one Aaysid, “you are your own weather,” this is fabulous! Hugs, C
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Thank you so much, Cheryl. 😊
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What lovely words
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Thank you so much.😊
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Absolutely amazing , Aaysid. Brilliant .💕
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Thank you so much, Grace.😊
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My pleasure .💕
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“You are your own weather ” this is just BRAVO
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Thank you so much.😊
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Great words Thanks Anita
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Thank you so much, Anita.😊
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I read this several times…and different things stood out with each reading. This is stunning poetry, and it resonates with me on a personal level. You’ve tapped into something profound here, Aaysid. This is gorgeous. Well done! 🙂
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I am so glad that you liked it. Thank you so much.😊
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Wow! amazing❤
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Thank you so much.❤
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I’m mostly sunny but the storm can arrive any minute. Haha! I must save myself. A very clever write, Aaysid. 🙂
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I can relate.😁Thank you so much. 😊
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Quite profound.
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Thank you so much.
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Absolutely amazing ❤️🌹👌
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Thank you so much.😊❤
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💜❤️❤️
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The last line.. just touched!!
Beautifully penned, Aaysid❤❤
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Thank you so much.😊
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oh wow Aaysid, this was brilliantly done.. 💖👏👏👏👏
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Thank you so much. I am glad that you liked it.😊
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My goodness, this is a lovely write, Aaysid. We are our own weather. This is so wise. Love it. ❤️
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Wow! Thank you so much for the kind feedback, Jeff!😊
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You’re most welcome, Aaysid. Always! ☺️
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the weather… your own…love it!
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