Scattered

I hope I’d be able to compose a proper concrete poem some day, but until then, I shall keep having fun experimenting.😊

The concrete poem in the image:

scattered words

if arranged

in a neat, little pile

can fall

off the page

©Aaysid

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  1. Love this!!! This poem had a double meaning to me since when reading it the first time I omitted letters TTE thus reading Sacred instead of Scattered. I find it to be potent either way. Simply brilliant! 🙏❤️🙏

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