Two gaping whirlpools
In one puddle of a face
Gazing through a wet film
Into an aquatic abyss
Since countless damp days
And many a water years,
Count rainfalls, sleet,
Snow and hailstorms,
But somehow remain
Soakingly unaware of
A swiftly advancing drought
That could arrive with
A promise to set them free
From the shackles of
Long-drawn-out precipitation!
©Aaysid
“The truth will set you free. But not until it is finished with you.”
David Foster Wallace
Wonderful, Aaysid. Love it!💕
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So glad you like it. Thank you, dear Grace.😊
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My pleasure 💕
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Oh, I love nature metaphors, and these are so perfectly written! This is a fascinating piece and so though-provoking. Exceptionally crafted, Aaysid! 🙂
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Thank you, Mike. I am so happy that you liked it.😊
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very deep thought crafted into the poem, wonderful!
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Thank you so much.🙂
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Nicely done Aaysid! 💖👏👏
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Thank you so much, Cindy.😊
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Always! 💖
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What an awesome poem, Aaysid. Flow and imagery are amazing! ☺️
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Thank you so much, Jeff.😊
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Wonderful as always!!🌠
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Thank you so much, Jan.😊
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The quote actually brings out the depth in your lovely words. Well written, Aaysid. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Terveen.😊
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exquisite slants. precipitasheen 🙂
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Thank you so much.🙂
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