TAKE 1
I see you writing
Me into your poems
And I have never felt
This seen before;
Maybe all we need
Is to be welcomed
Into places we wish
To be a part of!
TAKE 2
I see you writing
Me out of your poems
And I have never felt
This heard before;
Maybe all we needed
Was to be taken out
Of places we did not
Want to be a part of!
©Aaysid
“Some birds are not meant to be caged, that’s all. Their feathers are too bright, their songs too sweet and wild.”
Stephen King
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Both takes are wonderful , Aaysid. Love them.💕
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Thank you, dear Grace.😊
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My pleasure 💕
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This is creative and deeply felt😃
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Thank you so much.😊💕
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Nicely done. 💕
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Thank you so much, Michael.😊
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Gorgeous both, Aaysid! ☺️
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Thank you, Jeff.😊😊
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Poetic wisdom. ✨
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Thank you, dear Michele.😊
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Both are beautiful. So clever. 🙂
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Thank you, Terveen.😊😊
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love these ..so wonderfully uniquely you Aaysid! 💖💖
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Thank you, dear Cindy.😊
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a pleasure always! 💖
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I love the “seen” and “heard” in this wonderful poem. The two words make your two pomes into one. Therefore I said “this wonderful poem”.
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Thank you so much for your kind and insightful comment.😊
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Both takes are brilliant, and combined they create something even more so. I like your thinking here, and your ability to see things from multiple perspectives. This is such a cool poem, and so creative! 🙂
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Thank you, Mike, for your lovely words. I am so glad that you liked it.😊
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