Sometimes the only way
To break the ice
Is to stage a fight;
To slip and fall all over
The vast expanse
Of time which stands
Frozen beneath your feet,
Inside your ears,
And behind the glazed
Look in your eyes—
We can pretend
That nothing says love
Like shards of ice
Sticking out of a heart
That once was afire!
©Aaysid
“But that afternoon he asked himself, with his infinite capacity for illusion, if such pitiless indifference might not be a subterfuge for hiding the torments of love.“
Gabriel García Márquez, Love in the Time of Cholera
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something wonderful and wicked to evoke a passoinate response!~
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Aaysid, you have used the motif of ice so creatively in this poem. Well done! 🧊
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Thank you, Michele. I am happy that you liked it.😊
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Wow, Asyid! What a powerful piece of poetry! your style, metaphors and connections truly are stand up lines!~. Every one one of them. 👏👏
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Thank you so much, Cindy. I appreciate your kind feedback and support.😊
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You’re always welcome Dear Aaysid!! 💖💖💖🥰
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😊❤
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“The vast expanse
Of time which stands
Frozen beneath your feet,
Inside your ears,
And behind the glazed
Look in your eyes—”
Sadly, this describes my life! 😀 Oh well. Your metaphors are glorious and always so creative. Wonderful as always, Aaysid. 🙂
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The frozen time shall thaw one of these days and hopefully, something wonderful shall emerge. Thank you for your kind words, Mike. You are too generous. 🙂
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could not be more true! love it!
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Thank you so much. 😊
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The tussle persists…
Beautiful writing, Aaysid!🙂
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Thank you so much, Terveen.😊
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This poem speaks to me of the need to empty ourselves and express our emotions, especially when overheard. Love this one, Aaysid.
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Well said, Jeff. I am glad that you liked it. Thank you.😊
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“We can pretend
That nothing says love
Like shards of ice
Sticking out of a heart
That once was afire!”
Noteworthy lines 💐🌼
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Thank you so much.😊
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Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful poem.
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Thank you so much.😊
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