the clouds burst
at forlorn places
already soaking wet
because of many
a rivers cried before
the ruthless storms
had even arrived;
how can the eyes turned
skyward remain dry
when the cold,
pelting rain reminds
them of subdued feelings
which can be
buried again only if
cried out along
with the crying sky?
©Aaysid
“I woke to the sound of rain.”
Sylvia Plath
This is so beautiful and makes me long for rain (it’s super hot where I live!)
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I hope you’ll get a good spell of rain. It is not too hot, but it is awfully humid here.
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Beautiful🙂
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Thank you so much, Saima.😊
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all spent
and still heaven sent
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Wonderful poem, Aaysid. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much, dear Grace.❤😊
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My pleasure 💕
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Oh my, this is a beautiful poem, Aaysid. I love the connection between humanity and nature.
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Thank you, Jeff. I am so glad that you liked it. 😊
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A wonderful metaphor for human emotions, especially when life has drained one of them, at least temporarily. Love your work! 💗
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Wow! Thank you so much, Michele.😊❤
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You make pain look so beautiful. Can feel the anguish in those cries. 🙂
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That’s so kind of you. Thank you, Terveen.😊
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wonderful
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Thank you so much.😊
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Love the metaphor here so beautiful Asysid!
💖💖
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Thank you so much.😊
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