Not all words
When they touch
The solid ground
Can bounce back up,
Some of them stay
Huddledtogether,
While only a few
Dare break away
To wait for the ones
Still
.
©Aaysid
“The unspoken words trembled in the air.”
Iris Murdoch
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Outrageously Erratic 
A fun read. ☺️
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I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.😊
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So beautiful and thought provoking as always, dear friend! Missed reading your work 🤍🤗
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Thank you so much.😊
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Wonderful as always , Aaysid. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace. I am so happy that you liked it.😊
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I sure did. My pleasure.💕
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The imagery and truth in this poem are fascinating, and the concept of unuttered words holds such weight and importance and urgency. Your poetry is always delightful to experience, Aaysid. 🙂
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Thank you so much for your kind and generous comment, Mike. I am truly humbled.😊
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Words do have their own energy when they leave us. Your poem put that in a visual context for me. Wonderful work, Aaysid!
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Tried to have a little fun with the concept. Thank you for your appreciation.😊🌸
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Beautifully written. Waiting in anticipation for the unsaid… 🙂
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Thank you, Terveen, I appreciate your kindness.😊
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So creative, Aaysid. Wonderful poem!
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Thank you so much, Jeff. You are always too kind.😊
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You are so crushing these poems. love it Aaysid❣️
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Yaay! Thank you so much, dear Cindy.😊🌸
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It’s always a pleasure Dear! 💞
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Love your creativity here Aaysid! Especially the image in the last line! Your poems are deep; they have wisdom and wonderful flow!
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I appreciate your kind words. Thank you so much, Dominic.
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My pleasure Aaysid!
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Delightful Murdoch quote you chose for inspiration 🙂
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It is a beautiful quote indeed. Thank you.😊
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