I am enamoured of
the eerie silence
that follows
the booming fireworks,
the vacant grounds
after the carnival leaves,
and the phone call
that meekly ends
after a silent pause;
it always comes
as a pleasant surprise
when the loud world
hushes up
for the innately quiet.
©Aaysid
“When you are crazy you learn to keep quiet.”
Philip K. Dick
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It is quite surprising and eerie. The world needs to shut up more. Great writing, Aaysid! 🙂
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Yeah, that would be great! 😁 Thank you, Terveen. You are too kind.😊
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I appreciate this silence too. Great piece, Aaysid.💕
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🙂🙂 Thank you, Grace. 😊
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My pleasure 💕
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Amazing piece, Aaysid. The ending is just magical, I deeply resonate. You have such a gift of making your words extra beautiful 🤍🤍
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Wow! I am glad that you liked it. Thank you so much, Grace. You are too kind and generous.😊❤️
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Thanks for sharing your writing. Anita
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Thank you for your time.😊
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Interesting poem Aaysid! There is too much noise in this world! We need more silence!
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I agree. Thank you, Dominic.😊
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My pleasure Aaysid!
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Quietness and stillness are profound, and give way to a deeper understanding of sound. Awesome poem, Aaysid.
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Wonderfully said, Jeff. Thank you.😊
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“The innately quiet…” Yep, I get this, absolutely. As a pretty extreme introvert, I’m incredibly quiet in real-life. I, too, love the stillness the follows noise and bluster. It’s then when things reset and settle down again. You’re not only an amazing poet, Aaysid, you also appear to be a mind-reader at times! This is a wonderful, meaningful poem and I really identify with it. 🙂
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I am speechless, Mike. You are too kind. Thank you so much.😊
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love your poem and sentiments. Yes so true…. “the eerie silence
that follows
the booming fireworks,”
Like when I awake after the storms to an earthquake.. lol ❣️
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Oh, my! That sounds scary.😲
Thank you, Cindy.😊
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You’re so welcome Aaysid! 💗
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