I laugh hysterically
At my own madness,
At the audacity
Of a flimsy thought
That had risen
Like a phoenix
From the ashes
Of my archaic ideas
That had caught fire
Without provocation
Many moons ago,
To throw the outside
World into disarray—
It is utterly ridiculous
To be governed by
Your weakest thought
And to make
More sense than before!
©Aaysid
“Where does a thought go when it’s forgotten?”
Sigmund Freud
Free image from Pexels
You truly have a gift for refining broad and intriguing thoughts into a polished compact poem. Well done, Aaysid!
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Thank you so much, Michele. I am grateful for your kind feedback.😊
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You are welcome, Aaysid. 🌻
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Amazing piece, Aaysid. Wonderful.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace. 😊
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My pleasure 💕
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You’ve captured an interesting fact here very well Aaysid!
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Thank you so much, Dominic. I truly appreciate your kindness.
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My pleasure Aaysid!
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Risen from “the ashes
Of archaic ideas,” I like this. Loved the whole poem. Lovely
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Thank you so much, Selma. I am so glad that you liked it.😊😊
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Never underestimate the weak. Brilliant poetry. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Terveen. You are too kind and generous.😊
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Wonderful poem, Aaysid. I love the lines that read:
It is utterly ridiculous
To be governed by
Your weakest thought
And to make
More sense than before!
The Sigmund Freud quote is brilliant, too – “Where does a thought go when it’s forgotten?” Truly food for thought.
I really like your image at the top of this piece, Aaysid. Where did you find it, or did you paint it? Xx 🌼💕😘
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Thank you so much, Ellie. I am glad that you liked the poem. That image is from the free collection on Pexels under the category of abstract paintings.😊
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Thank you for letting me know about the picture. I use Pexels and Unsplash for my images. I’ve never thought to look for abstract pictures. It’s amazing what you find on these image websites. Xx 🤗
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You are very welcome. That is true. Some brilliant photography exists there.😊
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What a great piece Aaysid! I’m loving your laughing at the absurdity! ❣️
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Thank you so much, Cindy.💕😊
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A paradoxical quandary, elegantly expressed!
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Thank you, Jeff. You are too kind.
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