a few silver strands
stand out amidst
the raven hair
as if they foretell
the spectral events
yet to unfold
in a life well-lived,
or at least lived
with sporadic bursts
of intense curiosity,
despite feeling like the salt
that has been left inside
a tiny shaker
for too long,
but a tender, little
idea did slip away
and kept bouncing off
the walls, floorboards,
and the ceiling—
I have been here
at the same time as you.
©Aaysid
“Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality.”
Lewis Carroll
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Amazing , Aaysid. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace. I am so glad you liked it.😊
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My pleasure. I sure did 💕
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“the salt inside the tiny shaker… ” Your ability to find and create meaningful poetry out of the ordinary is delightful! Great metaphor, Aaysid! 👏🏻 Wonderful to read you!
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Thank you so much, Michele. I truly appreciate your kindness.😊✨️ I hope you’ll have a great week!😊
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My treat! 😊 Thanks so much, you too! 🌞
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“I have been here / at the same time as you…”
And I’m really glad for this because I get to read your beautiful and deeply profound poetry. You spoil us with your wonderful gift of words, Aaysid. 🙂
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Likewise.😊 I truly appreciate your kindness, Mike. Thank you so much.😊
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but a tender, little
idea did slip away
and kept bouncing off
the walls, floorboards,
and the ceiling—
I have been here
at the same time as you.
I enjoyed alot reading this, beautifully repressed.
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Thank you so much for your kind words.😊
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Amazing and I love your words. Anita
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Thank you, Anita. You are too kind.😊
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I love the rhythm and the ordinary words that speak to my heart. Thanks so much.
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I am so happy that you liked it, Selma. Thank you.😊❤
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I love the connection of the heart in your well done Poem my friend! 💞
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I truly appreciate your kind and encouraging words. Thank you so much, Cindy. 😊❤️
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You’re so welcome Aasid! ❣️
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