Substantial

a few silver strands

stand out amidst

the raven hair

as if they foretell

the spectral events

yet to unfold

in a life well-lived,

or at least lived

with sporadic bursts

of intense curiosity,

despite feeling like the salt

that has been left inside

a tiny shaker

for too long,

but a tender, little

idea did slip away

and kept bouncing off

the walls, floorboards,

and the ceiling—

I have been here

at the same time as you.

©Aaysid

Imagination is the only weapon in the war against reality.”
Lewis Carroll

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  1. “the salt inside the tiny shaker… ” Your ability to find and create meaningful poetry out of the ordinary is delightful! Great metaphor, Aaysid! 👏🏻 Wonderful to read you!

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  2. “I have been here / at the same time as you…”

    And I’m really glad for this because I get to read your beautiful and deeply profound poetry. You spoil us with your wonderful gift of words, Aaysid. 🙂

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  3. but a tender, little

    idea did slip away

    and kept bouncing off

    the walls, floorboards,

    and the ceiling—

    I have been here

    at the same time as you.
    I enjoyed alot reading this, beautifully repressed.

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