just like a ship
that you reassemble
inside a bottle
surrenders to fate
and cares for seas
no more,
I allow myself
to hallucinate
a little bit more,
forgetting that
anything bottled up
may stay away
for ages,
but one day
it might wash ashore,
but somethings
cannot be rebuilt,
especially the ones
you do not ask for.
Β©Aaysid
Such beautiful and heartfelt metaphors. Love it!π
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Thank you so much, Grace.πβ€
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My pleasure .π
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ooo such a stunning poetical language
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment.π
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pleasure’s mine tho ; )
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Gorgeous and thoughtful, and that imagery is really effective. Well done, Aaysid! π
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I am so glad that you liked it. Thank you so much.π
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Amazing words!! Loved it!!π
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Thank you so much, Jan. You are too kind.π
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So wise, Aaysid. I loved the analogy of the sea and emotion. Itβs just like that, I think. Wondeful write, my dear friend. βΊοΈ
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Thank you so much, Jeff. That’s so kind and generous of you.π
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Youβre most welcome, Aaysid. Always. βΊοΈ
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Wow wonderful metaphors dear Aaysid!
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Thank you so much, Cindy. π
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