The room around me
Begins to disappear
Ever so slightly,
The warm glow
Of the lamp fuzzes out,
Gets bigger and lighter
And impossible to ignore,
A chair in the corner
Casts a strange shadow
On the floor,
There is a gaping hole
In the wall where
There used to be a door,
And I am not there either,
Outside looking in,
Or inside looking for
What isn’t there anymore—
A mind needs no excuse
To fall apart,
It readily fragments
With the crumbling indoors.
©Aaysid
“That’s what the world is, after all: an endless battle of contrasting memories.”
Haruki Murakami, 1Q84
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Oh that was so good Aaysid! 💞👏
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Thank you, Cindy. I am so glad you liked it.😊😊
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You’re so welcome Asyid! 💘
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Abstract, elevated, and absolutely fantastic, Aaysid! 👏🏻
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Thank you so much, dear Michele. You are always too kind. I appreciate your support.🤗😊
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I am not that kind; I just recognize talent when I see it. 😆 Do you have a poetry book out?
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Aww! ❤️ Thank you, Michele. I think I lack discipline to complie a book, but I like posting my poems here so at least they are out in the world this way.😁
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Your readers like that you post, too. 😊 You’re doing a great job. I am certain you will find the discipline to compile a book someday, if you choose to. 🤗
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🤗😊
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This is exceptional writing, Aaysid. This one pulled me in with the first line and kept me hooked throughout. And the ending…startling and profound and so true. Sorry for gushing, but I really admire your writing. You’re a singular talent and so enjoyable to read. 🙂
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Oh, my! Thank you so much, Mike. It means a lot to me coming from you. You are too kind and generous.😊
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Such outstanding poetry you’ve penned, dear Aaysid! 🤗
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Thank you so much, Phil.😊
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What an awesome write, and equally awesome quote. It’s so true too, both. 😊
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Thank you so much, Jeff. I am so glad you liked it. 😊
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You’re most welcome, Aaysid. Always. 😊
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This is such a brilliant piece of writing, Aaysid. Excellently penned. I really enjoyed it – every word of it. Xx 😊💐💕
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Thank you so much, Ellie. I am glad that you liked it.❤️😊
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Woah
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Love the atmosphere you create in this poem Aaysid!
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Thank you so much, Dominic.😊
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My pleasure Aaysid!
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