I.
we do not have a common narrative;
when my world was upside down,
yours was the right way up,
and what was left was not all right!
II.
My every little thought
gets bigger, goes berserk,
and dies.
Your every small gesture
gets noticed, goes places,
and multiplies.
My every sombre word
gets mumbled, goes awry,
and dies.
Your every feeble idea
gets better, goes viral,
and multiplies.
III.
I apologise
For apologising
All the time;
You apologise
For me not
Apologising enough.
©Aaysid
“Little Alice fell down the hole, bumped her head and bruised her soul.”
Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland
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“My every little thought
gets bigger, goes berserk,
and dies.” I can totally relate to this one! Hugs, C
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😊💕
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All three pieces beautifully written!!
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Thank you so much. 😊
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Great collection, Aaysid. Love the comparative yet unique nature in each. Wonderful.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace.😊
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Always a pleasure, Aaysid.💕
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This is such a fab collection Aaysid! 💖💖
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Thank you so much, Cindy.💕😊
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Welcome sooo much 💖
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That’s a wondrous rabbit hole of words. You had me falling and spinning. Loved it! 🙂
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Wow! So happy that you liked them, Terveen. Thank you.😊
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Weaved so wonderfully, Aaysid. Your talent with language is quite stunning. I love all three! ☺️
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Thank you so much, Jeff. So glad you liked them.😊
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You’re welcome, Aaysid. Always my pleasure. Always.
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Really deep thoughts and feelings! Loved reading it!
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I am glad that you liked it. Thank you so much.
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My pleasure!
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this is amazing….
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Thank you so much.
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I love these collections of yours Aaysid. There’s always something there I can relate to, and your personal style of writing is so refreshing and deep. I look forward to these. Brilliant words. 🙂
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Thank you, Mike, for your kind and encouraging words. 😊
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