you called me
to let me know
that you were fragmenting,
and I, being someone
who can fall apart
unprompted,
retrieved the sweeping brush
from the pantry
of horrors-
not even an ounce
of sanity
was salvaged
from the brokenness.
©Aaysid
“We die a little every day and by degrees we’re reborn into different men, older men in the same clothes, with the same scars.”
Mark Lawrence
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Touching piece, Aaysid. Wonderful .💕
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Thank you so much, Grace.😊
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My pleasure 💕
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Rather sad, it reminds e of divorce. And, defragmenting an old Windows OS.
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The defregmentation bit is funny.😁
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Thanks, my brain may need a defrag soon! 😂
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It’s probably better to lose it all and then recover….
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A wise option, indeed.
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Sad but very beautiful, Aaysid. I like how you expressed your feelings, especially the part that reads …
‘and I, being someone
who can fall apart
unprompted,
retrieved the sweeping brush.’ …
I can very much identify with your poem, particularly those few lines. Beautifully said. Xx 🌷💕😘
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Thank you so much, dear Ellie. You are too kind.🌸😊
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Love the way you lay it all bare here Aaysid! Touching poem!
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Thank you, Dominic. You are too kind.😊
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My pleasure Aaysid!
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So touching ❤
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Thank you.🙂
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Love this … so true to.. “retrieved the sweeping brush
from the pantry
of horrors-“👏
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I am so glad you liked it, Cindy. Thank you.😊❤
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👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Thank you.❤️
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